Seriously dude. I need this MP3. This Flash rocked, It could be a bit better by making him dance a bit more, but this totally rocks. I love the song and the idea. Lifes a garden, dig it. Keep on keepin on.
This is a great flash IMO. The ending could use a little touching up as a previous poster mentioned. I think the images were great. Fix it up a bit and this will be even better.
Thank you so much for the review, means so much...I will fix them up...yeah, there is so much room for improvement.
1) you could have just updated the old one, you didn't need to upload another one.
2) Music should stop when you loop back to the begining. I don't know how to do this either though.
3) looping back to the preloader screen is kinda lame IMO.
4) Maybe add some graphics
5) Do not use multiple lines for quickly scrolling text. I couldn't read a lot of it.
I really likes the chair effect, that really made it all worth it. Overall it was pretty good, but if you did it in a bigger area, it probably could have been better. though I've been ruined by the Art of the Saber so I have high standards.
Only one problem with the whole thing, that dude needs some pants :)
Preferabally some HammerPants.
Other than than, it rocked.
The faces were nice, but the colors, bodies, etc weren't all that great, I mean, stick figures, Buu wan't wearing pants for god's sake. Gauntlets, no gauntlets, there they are again, and they're gone! Continuity is the issue, if you draw something in one part, it should be in the next part.it looks like you took some time to do this, I'd recommend going back and taking the time to do it right. Add in the bodies or atleast make the colors look somewhat right.
this is sponsored in part by the Buu should always be wearing pants foundation.
A good job and nice animation. though, a lightsaber cauterizes the wound as it cuts so it wouldn't have a blood spray when he stabs him with the saber :-p
Maybe you should also look into some fake blood with that style of yours.
i know, but not on a stick guy.
I hope you make more, since I already know most of this stuff. So, make more. Do it.
Its actually nice to learn the right way, instead of the way I make up and pretend to know what I'm doing. Since I taught myself in a couple of hours I really don't think much of the things I do is done right. I already know how to do the other suggestiong though... so... just make more. A lot more. Everytime you use something in a flash make a note to make one for that :) I know, I'm so demanding.
Try synching the movements of the hands to whats happening in the music. When they aren't playing their hands shouldn't be moving. Also add in some blinking and stuff. Its not like they run around, so you should pay more attantion to the little details.
Slight problem is that a communist dictatorship is kinda impossible. If there is a dictator, its technically not communism. USSR was not a commune, it was a totalitarian dictatorship.
The "ok" button, did you set a region for it or did you leave it so you had to actually click the letters? Because thats really lame to have to click the letter itself.
The music is a lot louder than the voices. It should be the other way around. I couldn't even hear the voices because of this.
I did like the artwork though, I just couldn't watch a movie that I can't understand whats going on because I can't hear the speaking.
Every singel group of people who call themselves comunist and take over counties establish a dictator, tecnicaly ur right there not realy comunist, but they call themselves comunists and over the years that has defined comunisem. There has never been such a thing as a perfict comunist socicty, and there never will be one, because its against human nature to not want to better yourself, to strive for exslience.
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